Global climate change

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Who can we trust?

Global climate change gets worse. Who can we trust and where can we find the infromation? Where and how can we find the right data and information to trust? The Organization that works for this are AAAS and NAS those two are the ones that give out data that you can trust but also very hard to understand for a normal person. This two organizations give out data that you can trust but also very hard to understand for the people that don't work with science and can easily get confused. AAAS and NAS have the data to prove that the global climate change is happening and that the CO2 is coursing the temperature changes, but this is not shown in a easy way. Companies like Exxon pays corporations to lie about the global climate change and work against everything the scientist have to say. Exxon is the worlds biggest oil company they pay the corporations and the corporations give the money to the ones that talk for them like people from the government or Scientist with a high degree. Exxon spend millions of dollar on this every year. They can do this buy just give out simple data or just explanations in news paper that people read on a daily base and convince them. The Global climate change is only going to effect us not the earth that's what the people have to understand and that the small numbers are really big in a scientific prospective. What the media and big company's do is giving out simple ideas that are easy to remember and understand.

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question: Should we try to find Aliens or should we just let them be?


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Can Stephan Hawking's theory be right? Aliens could do the same thing to us that Columbus' discovery did to the Native Americans. The negative possibilities of contact with alins outweigh the positives. If we find out more about aliens we could probably find out more about how we were created in a smiler way or find something good on there planet that we can use. However,  if we let the aliens be, we will be safe for a much longer time.


if now something will happen in a few 100 or 1000 years and.




 If we discover Alien life it might not go well for us.  Should we try to find out more about aliens? Should we let the aliens be?

Knives paragraph

Knive 

The killer stab them to death. The killer comes from behind and stab them when they not are ready. Pure evil is out there and can strike at any time, you are never truly safe. Lamber is facing the alien when it take the tail and stab it in her back. Scream is always caring a knive when he is about to murder. This situations disk rib when they get kille by knives.

Australia paragraph

Australia paragraph

Flooding killed 25 people in the city of Brisbane in Australia. People were woken up thursday morning by the flooding that quickly the submerged houses. Many were thankful that even more was not lost. At least 145 have been killed across the globe by flooding. It has rained non stop in Brisbane that let to many peoples death.

Blood paragraph

Blood

Blood is droops from there faces. The killer comes in the dark and make them bleed to they die. Only the most pure and resourceful survive. Scream and he's partner are staging each other in the kitchen so know one will think is was them. One of the crew members got attackt by the Aline, got a egg in side him later on the Aline burst out from the stomach and blood is squirt out. All this shows how the murder kills in horror movies and how it always is blood.

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- Hook
Body Paragraph 1 - Michael Clayton cop or lawyer?

- Introduction

-Thesis

- Example (2 maximum)

- Explanation 50-70 % of the paragraph, including context

- Conclusion/link to next paragraph

Michael Clayton's car expodes into flame.  When the car explodes Miachael throw all hes stuff in to the car so the police thinks he is dead? Michael Clayton and those around him often struggle to understand if he is a cop or a lawyer.  When Michaels car blows up he throws all his stuff in to the burning car so they think that he died, thinking like a detective. His own brother says to him, "people starting to wonder if you are a lawyer or a cop" This happens after Michael goes up to Arthur's apartment but after a whille he gets taken away by the police and after that trys to solve his death and why he died.When Michael are at the police house hes brother takes him out from the waiting rum. When the get out from there Michaels brother get angry at Michael because he puts hes carier in risk. When the police came and Aristated Michael in Arthurs apartment Michael new who was responisbell for everything.

Body Paragraph 2 - in control or controlled? 

Michael knew who the killer was when he saw all the documents in Arthur's apartment about all the bad things U north had done. When Arthur got killed, then Michael went to the apartment to find some evidens? Michael Clayton feels like he has too much to handle?

Michael went to Marty to borrow some money.

Michael found a book about everything Arthur had worked on for U north. The book was about all the bad things U north had done. Soon after, Marty gave him the money, but ther were'strings' attached. (think of the picture on the blog)
Michael plays cards when he is frustrated about something and he had big loans from loan shark because of that. When Michael goes to Marti to ask for money, Marti asks is it the card games again. Michael needs the money to pay the loan shark back because everytime Michael feel tiprest or stresst he goes and play cards. Michael have lost alot of money becouse of it, and the problem make him borrow money from dangarus people. Thats why he later on goes and ask Marthi for money. Arhur worked for Unorth but he fond information that was bad if someone els found out about. Arthur didnt like the thing they did so he wanted to AVSLOJA them so Karen told her collige that we have to contain him. When Michael starting to get his life toghter again he finds out the thing that Unort did to Arthur going to AVSLOJA them.

Body Paragraph 3  - fixer or janitor?

"Are you so fucking blind you don’t see what I am? I’m the easiest part of your whole problem and you’re gonna kill me? Don’t you know who I am? I’m a fixer! I’m a bagman!" If someone has a problem or needs a favour, Michael is there to clean up the bad stuff and make good stuff happen.  Michael fixing the problems that Arther got in to. Michael calls himself a fixer when he talking to Karen at the end of the film when he's setting her up to admit her crme of having Arthur killed.,  He calls himself and Arthur janitors when he calls Arthur (for what purpose?) He says, “We are janitors. I get it, but we came to this for a reason”. When Karen gets out from the meating she ses Michael. Michael is puts her in alot of presior. Michael tell her to give him 10 milijon because els he will tell the police what they are up to. He puts her under alot so much pressure so she starts to confest. Arhur and Michael staid at a hotell when Micheal left the hotell for a fiu hours when Michael came back was Arthur gone. Arthur tryed to avoid the problem by hid? When the police Michael got all the information he needed he just started to walk and then the police took her.

Conclusion Paragraph

Conclusion Paragraph

• Hook
• Introduction
• Restatement of paper thesis
• Key ideas from explanations in body paragraphs
• Big finish

Introduction Paragraph

Introduction Paragraph

• Hook
• Introduction
• Paper thesis/statement of position
  
• What will be used and how/(-30-50% of paragraph)


• Link to body paragraph 1

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-Hook

- Introduction

-Thesis

-Example (2 maximum)

-Explanation 50-70 % of the paragraph
Incloding context

-Conclusion/link to next paragraph

character paragraph

Michael Clayton

Cleanser of the Hidden sins.
Michael Clayton is a lawyer but he is not practicing the law because he is a fixe.

Michael is a good fixer because he is resourceful.

Resourceful Bankrolls fifties. Michael has much money.

Resourceful Michael says that he is not like the other lawyer. He is not practicing the laws because he fixes things at the law form.

Michael is man that helps people that have done something, to get on the right side of life.