Showing posts with label Editorial. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Editorial. Show all posts

Wednesday, February 15, 2012

The latest UN climate summit says much about why the world is failing to tackle global warming

Deek 

How can we tackle Global warming. 


Reasons 


To much co2 is sent out.


Green house gases


Minimize the risk of catastrophe.


Why is the world failing to take global warming.


Concession 


Its not possible to make all does big changes without alot of people working against it. 


Destroy concession with brilliant response which is your final and best reason.


Its going to be over for all of us if we dont do anything about the climate change. We are not killing the planter we are kiling are selfs.



Tuesday, September 27, 2011

How Diploma students could create an appropriate environment for laptops in the Diploma room

Hook . Introduction . Thesis  Examples  Explanation Conclusion/link


Approve laptops in the diploma room. Diploma room is a place made for working. Diploma students could create an appropriate environment for laptops in the Diploma room. Maturity and focus are the two key ideas. Students need to be able to work and focus and not fool around. Students use Laptops to socializing and work.

Laptops are a big distraction but also the most used school tool. Is it necessary to get work done in the Diploma lounge with laptops. Most of the work is on the internet. Laptops are used in every class because the work is put up on the internet. My English class is all online on a blog. English class is use the internet every class, we can find all the homework on the blog and when we have done it we post it there.

Dont fool around during a school day.. Take care of the time you have Also, you can .tell other students to work instead of just sitting there. Finish the work in school when you have the chance instead of doing it at home. If they don’t care you can go and tell a teacher or go to the library. If you get distracted or disturbed by your class mates then you can go to the library where you know that no one can disturb you.

When students are in the Diploma room some of them are trying to work.
Don't fool around Don’t go on websites that you’re not supposed to go on. When you go on inappropriate websites your going to distract others. Dont play witht the basket ball or footballs. When you start to bounce a ball everyone in the room is going to be distracted and stop working because they can't think with all the noise.

Think about what you are doing when you see students work. Don't distract others. Don't make to much Noise. If you put on music ask the people in the room first and when you talk think about your tone. Don't leave your thing everywhere and make a mess. Try to get the place to look nice so we can have a better working environment.

The time you spend in class working is the time you dont have to spend working at home. Be responsible. Work on your homework in the lounge when there is no one else there.  When other people are in the room the distractions start up. Then it's time to go to the library There you can get your work done at your pace without any distractions This whole thing is about responsibility and so far we haven’t had the chance to show that we can’t work in there. The teachers have to let the DP students show that they can get work done in there. Not assume that the students are doing other stuff and that this is the way to change it.


Yes the diploma lounge could be an appropriate working environment, but that is not really how the students see it. The DP room is really a chill out room but computers are what today's teenagers use to chill out. Computers are needed. Every day we use our computer for both school and fun stuff. With computer in the diploma room we can both hang out in there if its possible. Students need to find a way to use their computers and their time, responsibly and effectively.





Thursday, September 8, 2011

Hook


Laptops in the diploma room

Deek


How diploma students could create an appropriate environment for laptops in the Diploma room.

Reasons In order


Tell other students to stop if you see them fo something they not are suppose to.


don't talk if you see that other students are trying to work.


Block websites that can be used a lot instead of working.

Sunday, September 4, 2011

Laptops in the Diploma room

Laptop frustration for the diploma students

Why Diploma students should not be allowed to have laptops in the Diploma common room


No laptops in the diploma lounge. Diploma students have been complaining that they cannot use laptops in the Diploma lounge. However, laptops shouldn't be used or allowed in the diploma lounge. Responsibility, focus and maturity are the issues that must be discussed. The diploma lounge itself must be considered first. 

There are too many distraction and temptations in the room. Students don't work efficiently in the diploma lounge. Instead of working you maybe go to check if there is any thing the refrigerator. When you go to get something like in the refrigerator you just trying to pass on time. Sometimes just take up the ipad and play some games. You feel like you can do what ever you want.

Unsupervised sessions will result in students that not going to work as effectively as if they had a teacher. Students require a teacher in the room to work as effectively as possible. When students don't have a teacher in room they lose focus.They are more likely to go on inappropriate websites. They don't get as much work done as they could.



Tired students are more likely to end up doing something else. Students are more likely to distract each other. No one is  there to tell you when to stop. If you are done with most of the work your going to start to go one inappropriate websites. Start to talk to other to have something to do. When you are talking to your class mates you will distract them and even if you are done that doesn't mean that they are.

Diploma students like the idea of a room for them self. Students want to show their maturity and responsibility. They are grown ups now so they should be able to take care of them self's. This is the most important year and they have to be able to take care of them selfs. Even if there is no teachers the students have to be able to work and take there own decision. No one is going to help them with that late on in life.


The diploma lounge is not good work place for a responsible student. Mature and responsible student would not chose to work in the DP lounge. The library have teacher supervision so you can ask for help if you need it. Student work better when they have a chance to get help. The space in the library is bigger so if you get distracted you can just move and sit somewhere else. You can move away from the others if you feel like you dont get any work done around them.




They also put on musice without headphones, and that will disturb the other studnets from working.

When you are tired you just going to end up doing something else.No one is  there to tell you when to stop. If you are done with most of the work your starting to go one inappropriate websites. Start to talk to other to have something to do. When you are talking to your class mates you will distract them and even if you are done that dosen't meen that they are.

Diploma students like the idea of a room for them self. Diploma students want to show that they are responsible enough to work on their own. They are grown ups now so they should be able to take care of them selfs. Even if there is no teachers the students have to be able to work and take there own decision because no one is going to be doing it for them late on in life.

A truly responsible self -controlling student would of course choose to work in the library. The library have teacher supervision so you can ask for help if you need it. The space in the library is bigger so if you get distracted you can just move and sit somewhere else.

The library is a better work place. The diploma lounge have to many distractions and temptions.There is always teacher supervision in the library. Also more space so you can sit somewhere else if you feel like you getting disturbed. It’s a more quiet work place and you if you need help there is always someone there to help you. Responisble studnets that want to get much work done goes to the library.