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Gaddafi forces claim major gains (Headline)

(Introduction)(Who,What,Where,When)

Libyan state TV says troops loyal to Colonel Muammar Gaddafi have made significant gains against rebel forces who have taken much of the country in a two-week insurrection.(when understood yesterday)

(Why the audience cares)
The TV said they retook towns including Misrata, Ras Lanuf and Tobruk.

But a BBC correspondent in Ras Lanuf says the important oil refinery town remains under rebel control.

(Most important dietails) 

The BBC's Jon Leyne in Benghazi says the government's claims go against all the evidence on the ground, unless there has been a sudden and dramatic swing overnight - of which there is no sign. (furthur most important dietaile)

(Furthur important details)

A rebel commander told Reuter news agency that his forces had pushed on further westward, moving closer to Col Gaddafi's heavily-defended home town of Sirte after taking more territory on Saturday.

Clashes were reported on Sunday morning in the small town of Bin Jawad, about 50 km (30 miles) from Ras Lanuf.

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Daily Mail March 4

U.S. commander makes rare apology after air strike kills nine civilians in Afghanistan
(Headline)

(Deck)
Civilian casualties up 20 per cent to 6,215 since 2009


Introduction (who, what, where, when)
The commander of U.S. and Nato forces in Afghanistan made a rare apology yesterday for an air strike that killed nine civilians.


(Why the audience cares)
The move comes after Afghan politicians warned a rise in such raids was hampering efforts to end the war against the Taliban.            

(Most important details)
U.S. Army General David Petraeus ordered all military commanders and attack helicopter crews to be re-briefed on the rules for carrying out air raids after a spate of recent civilian casualty incidents in the east of the country.
        
(Further important details)
Members of parliament angrily denounced two recent Nato strikes in eastern Kunar province in which they said more than 73 civilians were killed, about half of them children, and called on Petraeus to explain.     

BBC march 4th

Headline
Libya revolt: Rebels say no talks unless Gaddafi goes


Introduction
Rebels in eastern Libya have said they will not negotiate unless Col Muammar Gaddafi quits and goes into exile.

Why the audience cares
The National Libyan Council in the city of Benghazi also called again for foreign intervention to stop government air raids against the rebels.

Most important details
The International Criminal Court meanwhile said it would investigate Col Gaddafi and some of his sons for crimes against humanity.

further important details
US President Barack Obama repeated his demand that the embattled ruler resign.


In Benghazi, the opposition National Libyan Council said there was no room for talks, following reports that Col Gaddafi had ordered an intelligence chief to negotiate with the rebels.

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BBC Sudan 

Sudan gained independence from Great Britain in 1956.

Two civil wars have engulfed the country for almost 30 years.

The sources of these conflicts were rooted in the economic, political and social domination by the predominantly Muslim and Arab north over the largely Christian south

 The Sudan Liberation Movement/Army (SLM/A) and Justice and Equality Movement (JEM) groups in Darfur mobilized the government of Sudan.

Genocide is the deliberate and systematic destruction, in whole or in part, of an ethnic, racial, religious or national group.

 2 million people were displaced from their homeland and an estimated 200,000 to 400,000 died as a result of the conflict.

The major sources take the majority of the rich oil export into its control.

U.S spending around $280 million annually on development and assistant projects and another $100 million on food aid.

 Sudan have a lack of basic infrastructure, including paved roads, access to clean water and health care.